Thanks to Peevish Penman for hosting today's blogfest!  You can find out all about it, and read all the other entries here.  I've also done a post (for those interested) on tips for 'new editors' - or rather, new writers who are editing.  You can check that out below or here  (It's actually a lot better advice than the below blog :-P)

What defines a new writer?  It's a tricky one.  I wrote my first full-length 'novel-style' story at eight years old.  I may have moved on from shipwrecked adventures, but I still feel very much like a new writer.  I've been working on my novel for nearly two years now, and it is the first one I have ever completed to a point where I'm actually terrified at the thought of my USB dying, my laptop getting stolen, my home computer shorting and the back up versions in my email, sisters laptop and friends computers all disappearing.  Everything else I wrote ended up getting the good ol' "move to trash" click of the mouse.

I still feel like a new author.  Even if I get published I doubt I feel any 'older' as a writer.  After all, writing is learning.  About yourself, your characters, your world and most of all your writing.

Even so, I have been given some good advice that I can share.  Here are the top five tips for 'new' writers that I have been given.  They helped me so I hope they help you too!


1) Write a novel.
The sense of accomplishment you get when you write the final line of your first draft in incredible.  To 'finish' (I'm ignoring the months and possibly years of editing when I say this) a novel is huge.  To pour all your heart and soul into such a huge piece of work and actually complete it is a feat not many people achieve.  How many people can actually say they've done it?  We are an elite few.  We should allow ourselves to bask in the glory for a while.

National Novel Writing Month is an exhilarating experience.  50,000 words in November.  It's insane and not for the fainthearted.  I wrote "Phoenix's Ashes" in Nano 2009.  I'd been working on it since 2008, but decided it wasn't working so literally ripped it up and started again.  It was the best thing I could have done.  If you haven't taken part in NaNo before I highly recommend it.  For those in the Southern Hemisphere, Kiwiwriters also hold SoCNoC, which is 50,000 words in June. 

2) Work on more than one writing project at a time.
It's ok to work on more than one project at a time.  I'm working on four.  Concentrating on one, but the other three are stewing away.  The way to finish that novel is to keep writing.  Sometimes, when I'm ready to throw the towel in, I just work on one of my other WIPs.  That way I'm always working on something and never have an 'off' day.

3) Critique other's work
Join a local crit group.  Network online to find crit buddies.  Critters.org is one I'd recommend for fantasy, sci-fi and horror writers.  Not only will you get others to read your work, but you will learn so much from pointing out flaws in others work.  My writing has grown 100% since I started critiquing.  You start to notice repeated mistakes that make you look back at your own work and find the same ones.

4) Never (and I mean NEVER) let anyone read your first draft.
Other than the fact that it will be full of spelling and grammatical errors, cliches, horrible sentence structure and no flow, the person you give it to will probably never want to read anything else of yours again.  You could end up with some harsh crits that make you want to give up.  Take the time to edit first.  Take the time to edit it several times!  You will get relevant ideas from your critiquer that way, rather than having them point out every spelling mistake.

5) Don't be afraid to put your work out there.
Even though I said don't hand over your first draft, that doesn't mean you shouldn't let anyone read your work ever.  Get friends and family to look at it.  Yes, they will probably sugar coat everything and tell you its the best thing since Harry Potter, but they may come out with a few gems.  Ask them the right questions and you may get some information out of them that is helpful.  Plus, they'll make you feel good about your writing!

Then, be brave and search further afield.  Join writers and readers networks like Books Down Under (who have a crit group!) and get to know other writers.  Join Critters.  Hop on twitter and find other writers.  Find a local writers group like kiwiwriters.  Meet people, and crit their work.  Then find people to crit yours back.

Yes, some people might rip your work to shreds.  Rise above the bad ones and learn from everything.  Your writing will thank you.


That's all folks.


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I'm a big fan of critiquing.  My policy is that the more I critique others work, the more I learn about my own.  When it comes to getting my own work critiqued I'd like to think that karma plays a part.  Hopefully the more I critique, the more crits I'll receive back!  Of course it doesn't work out to be a perfect balance.  I probably crit three to four times as much as I receive, but since I'm learning through it all, I'll keep on critiquing until my brain overloads.

So if you have something you'd like to have critiqued let me know!  I'm always happy to help out other budding writers.

I'm at the stage of PHOENIX"S ASHES where I am starting to think about getting my manuscript 'professionally' critiqued, or assessed.  There are lots of options available.  I could go to one of the manuscript assessors in New Zealand, or look to overseas.  I'm still unsure on how worthwhile it will be, but I think with some careful research on picking the right person to help me out, it could be an exceptionally valuable investment.

Right now there is a fantastic opportunity available for those looking at getting their manuscript looked at by a professional.  Cassandra Marshall (@CA_Marshall on twitter has some fantastic tweets by the way) is holding a competition for a free substantial edit.  A wonderful opportunity for people like me who are at the stage of holding an incomplete 'completed' manuscript (as I like to call mine) in their hand and are teetering on the edge of the next step... getting is looked at by someone else.  Enter here.

In the meantime, may your words flow and your characters come to life.

 
 
Getting the right feedback on you novel is an important part of writing.  Generally, you are writing for your readers.  Therefore it is crucial to understand your potential readers thoughts on your novel (or short story).  The best way to do this is to get your work critiqued, but in order to get the most out if it, it can help to have some prepared questions to ask your reader.  This is especially true if you have given your book to a friend.  They may not want to offend you so asking them the below questions should help you get useful information out of them.

These questions can be broken into the usual elements that make a novel or short story.

Plot
1.   When did the story 'kick in' for you?
2.   At what point(s) did you find yourself skim reading?
3.   What you thought the most suspenseful moment in the book was and why?
4.   What was your favourite moment in the book and why?
5.   What was it that made you keep reading right to the end?
6.   How did you feel at the end of the novel?

Characters
6.   How did you feel about [insert character name here]?  Did you dislike or like them?
7.   Which character did you relate to the most and why?
8.   Which character in the book was your favourite and why?
9.   Which character did you like the least?
10. How did [insert character name here] change?

Setting
11. Which setting in the book felt the closest to coming to life for you?
12. Which setting do you remember the best?

Theme
13. Did anything in the book remind you of your own life?
14. What main idea(s) do you think was portrayed in the book?

Style
15. Did the POV (first person, third person etc) feel right for  the novel?
16. What did you think the main style of writing was in the book (informal, formal, chatty, 
       personal, indifferent, voice of God, intimate etc)?
17. Did the writing style fit with the characters or plot?

Other
18. Is there anything you would change in the book?
19. Is the book similar in any way to anything else you have read?
20. Which genre would you classify it if you were putting it in a bookstore?

Hopefully you can get some excellent feedback, even from the most tactful of friends.
 

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